Excellent! Very funny and clever. :)

Wow, I loved this chapter! The story is great, and I also loved the way you did the thought bubbles (on scene 2 where the thought extends outside the image, that's very metaphoric!)

I enjoyed it all, but I can't get used to sims not knowing about the Watcher! Mine have been mostly Peterans for many, many generations now... ;)

I love your story so much <3 Keep up the great work!!